Thursday, November 15, 2007

Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Dear Reader,
On my essay "Philosophy of Government" I would grade myself a 3 on a scale of (1-4).The reason why I graded myself a 3 is because I feel that my essay was good instead of great.My intro was a 4 because it had a thesis statement, and stated three key points stating why goverment is necessary.For my 2 body paragraphs I gave myself a 2 because I felt that it was okay because I used details and explained my opinion but not enough facts.Overall I rate a 4 for my conclusion because it explained good statements and ended,explaining my overall statement on my philosophy.Thats why overall my whole essay is a 3

Wednesday, October 31, 2007

Thursday, October 25, 2007

Graduation 2011

"Graduation 2011"
Many years ago people like African Americans didn't really have a good chance of learning, they fought and stuggled to get their rights. Now that we have freedom we can get the education that will help us later in the future. That's why I feel that I will graduating in the year 2011 because I don't get into trouble and I do all of my work. Another reason why I feel that I will be graduating is because I want my ancestors and my parents proud of me. These couple of years of my life my parents have supported me and told me that I can do it. Graduating in 2011 will make them proud and myself because I am confident in myself and can stay focus because I when I get older I wish to become a Pediatritian. Not just persuading my dreams but having a good education is what's important to.

Tuesday, October 9, 2007

Philosophy of Government

I agree with Thomas Hobbes because he believed that we needed rules in order for us to have a safe society. That's why I believe that we need government because without government our society would be nasty, brutish, and poor.