Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Dear Reader,
On my essay "Philosophy of Government" I would grade myself a 3 on a scale of (1-4).The reason why I graded myself a 3 is because I feel that my essay was good instead of great.My intro was a 4 because it had a thesis statement, and stated three key points stating why goverment is necessary.For my 2 body paragraphs I gave myself a 2 because I felt that it was okay because I used details and explained my opinion but not enough facts.Overall I rate a 4 for my conclusion because it explained good statements and ended,explaining my overall statement on my philosophy.Thats why overall my whole essay is a 3

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